$175.00 USD

Service Provider: College Admissions Unlocked (Laura Smith)
Service: Complete Essay Review
Fee: $175 (paid in full at time of booking)

1. Scope of Service

  • The Complete Essay Review includes:

    • One offline edit of a student’s essay draft (up to 650 words).

    • In-line suggestions and revisions directly on the essay.

    • Narrative recommendations to strengthen storytelling and impact.

    • Actionable suggestions for the next draft.

  • This service is limited to one essay draft. Additional drafts or essays require a separate purchase.

2. Delivery Timeline

  • Essay reviews will be delivered within 4 business days of receiving the essay, unless otherwise communicated in writing.

  • Business days are Monday–Friday, excluding holidays.

3. Client Responsibilities

  • The client agrees to submit the essay draft in an editable format (Word or Google Doc).

  • The client is responsible for implementing revisions and submitting any additional drafts, if desired.

4. Limitations

  • This service provides feedback and suggestions only. It does not guarantee admission to any college or university.

  • College Admissions Unlocked will not write or fully rewrite the essay on behalf of the student.

5. Payment & Refund Policy

  • Payment of $175 is required in full prior to service.

  • Due to the nature of the work, all sales are final and no refunds will be issued once the essay has been submitted for review.

6. Confidentiality

  • All student essays and personal information will remain confidential and will not be shared with third parties.

7. Agreement

By purchasing the Complete Essay Review, the client acknowledges that they have read, understood, and agree to the terms outlined in this Service Agreement.

Written feedback is powerful—but pairing it with a live strategy call makes all the difference. This one-hour session takes your student’s essay review to the next level, giving them direct access to expert guidance in real time.

Here’s what families love about this add-on:

  • Clarity beyond the page – We don’t just talk about the essay. We zoom out to look at your student’s entire application narrative—how their activities, personal story, and goals come together to make them stand out.

  • Deeper essay support – We’ll walk through the essay draft together, discussing what’s working, what’s holding it back, and what story choices will leave the biggest impression on admissions officers.

  • Real-time answers and confidence – Instead of waiting for the “next draft” to see if your student is on the right track, they’ll leave the call knowing exactly how to move forward. No more second-guessing or spinning their wheels.

  • A clear action plan – Every student leaves the call with specific next steps for their essay and their application strategy, so progress happens quickly.

If you want the essay review to create not just stronger writing, but a stronger application overall, this call is the no-brainer next step.

Complete Essay Review + Revisions and Suggestions

Get expert, detailed feedback on your student’s college essay. Each review includes:

  • Comprehensive offline edit with clear in-line suggestions and revisions

  • Narrative recommendations to strengthen storytelling and impact

  • Actionable guidance for the next draft to move the essay closer to final submission

All reviews are delivered within 4 business days (unless otherwise communicated), ensuring students get timely, constructive feedback to keep their applications on track.