Top 5 College Essay Mistakes Students Make — and How to Avoid Them

The personal statement is often the most stressful part of the college application — and with good reason. It’s where your student has the chance to speak directly to the admissions team.

Unfortunately, too many students fall into the same traps. Here are the top five college essay mistakes — and how to avoid them.

1. Writing a Resume in Paragraph Form

The essay shouldn’t repeat what’s in the Activities List. Instead, it should add new insight into who your student is and what they value.

2. Choosing a Topic That Feels Safe

Admissions officers read thousands of essays about sports injuries and mission trips. A more specific, authentic story always wins.

3. Trying to Sound “Impressive” Instead of Real

The best essays are vulnerable, honest, and personal. Don’t write for the reader — write to show who you really are.

4. Ignoring the Bigger Picture

Great essays connect a personal story to a broader theme, impact, or insight. The goal is to show growth and reflection.

5. Not Getting Expert Feedback

Revisions are everything. A good editor can help elevate a strong essay to an outstanding one.

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